Daily Prompt Pack: Landing page copy – Turn visitors into demo bookings with a pain-first rewrite

Most landing pages bury the one line a buyer needs to see. Here is how I get founders to rewrite theirs around the pain instead of the product. Three prompts, one per tool, each ending in a file you can ship.

[Claude]

I run a B2B SaaS for [your niche] and my demo request rate flatlined. Paste my current hero section. Rewrite the headline and subhead so the first line names the exact pain my buyer wakes up to, then make the offer specific to them. Output a table: original line, new line, and the buyer fear it speaks to. Keep it under 120 words of copy.

[ChatGPT]

Here is my landing page for [product] aimed at [role]. Given my demo target of 2 per day, audit the top fold: hero, CTA, and first proof point. Rewrite the CTA button and its caption so the action feels small and the risk smaller. Deliver a list of 5 CTA options with the objection each one removes.

[Cursor]

Open components/hero.tsx and the copy.ts constant in my repo. Swap the current hero copy for a pain-first version I paste below, keeping the same props and markup. Then extract every {productFeature} string into copy.ts and generate a one-line review comment for each that flags vague benefits. Output a git diff and the review list.

Full archive at aicofounderstack.com/tag/prompt-pack.